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The Morning Garden


The sun rose against the darkness of night ; greeting a new day
Birds sang their morning song, high in the air
Along with angels to sound pleasant
A sonata began to play

The sun placed his banner upon the skies ; welcoming a new moment
Darkness was being replaced by the morning light
Although she wanted to witness the beauty of dawn
Which is gone since the yearful night ; and then returned to start over again

Finally the sun reigned upon his zenith ; the sun shone brightly
Yet he discovered a new oak tree by his sight ; it grows
Above the the hill to the edge of the skies
Higher and higher it gets ; and sweeter the fruit it bears
:iconheavenlytouch:
I wrote this poem based on this prompt :
With warmers days starting in many areas of the world, the sun is starting to shine more and more often. What sort of thoughts and memories come to your mind when you look up at the sun?
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~Manigran Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely to read. The imagery made me feel warm inside.
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=DragonsChest May 25, 2012  Professional Writer
A beautiful poem...
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Mood: Love ~heavenlytouch Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
WOWWIE ! Thanks a lot ! :happybounce:
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=DragonsChest Jun 3, 2012  Professional Writer
It is a pleasure...:w00t:
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:iconthefinalhikari:
Thank you for participating in our prompt at #Live-Love-Write! :iconlajumpplz:

This was such a lovely and pleasant sounding piece. :la: There was just one thing I wanted to ask; did you purposely leave a space before your semicolons to create an effect?

Either way, good work! :)


*TheFinalHikari
Founder of #Writers--club, #LandoftheSky, and #Live-Love-Write
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Mood: Love ~heavenlytouch May 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you thank you thank you ! :heart:
About the semicolon, I leave a space for some special effects. :D And I think it's perfect to be there. :)
Thank you for letting me join this amazing prompt !
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Mood: Love ~TotallyUncreativeMe Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
really pretty images
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Mood: Love ~heavenlytouch Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks !!! :)
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*JulienKraakman Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Lovely :)
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Mood: Love ~heavenlytouch Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks ! :heart:
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