The sun rose against the darkness of night ; greeting a new day Birds sang their morning song, high in the air Along with angels to sound pleasant A sonata began to play
The sun placed his banner upon the skies ; welcoming a new moment Darkness was being replaced by the morning light Although she wanted to witness the beauty of dawn Which is gone since the yearful night ; and then returned to start over again
Finally the sun reigned upon his zenith ; the sun shone brightly Yet he discovered a new oak tree by his sight ; it grows Above the the hill to the edge of the skies Higher and higher it gets ; and sweeter the fruit it bears
I wrote this poem based on this prompt : With warmers days starting in many areas of the world, the sun is starting to shine more and more often. What sort of thoughts and memories come to your mind when you look up at the sun?
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This was such a lovely and pleasant sounding piece. There was just one thing I wanted to ask; did you purposely leave a space before your semicolons to create an effect?
Thank you thank you thank you ! About the semicolon, I leave a space for some special effects. And I think it's perfect to be there. Thank you for letting me join this amazing prompt !
This was such a lovely and pleasant sounding piece.
Either way, good work!
*TheFinalHikari
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About the semicolon, I leave a space for some special effects.
Thank you for letting me join this amazing prompt !